W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.
Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
On Friday the 10th of March Ako Ngatahi, Ruma Toru, Ruma Wha and Wahi Ako (about 150 people) left school on blue buses to go to Spencer Park. We had to get put into groups. There was four groups and I was in group 2. My teacher was Miss Millard and there was a lot of parent helpers.
The first place my group walked to was the Spencer Beach. When we were on the way to the beach we walked a long way because there was a shortcut we didn’t take. At the beach I dug a hole so deep it had water in it. On the way back me Bailey and Mattisin were talking about what we were gonna play on the playground.
At the playground I had some lunch and played on the Climbing Web and the swings. For lunch I had some salt and vinegar chips and Vegemite sandwiches. It was very tasty. On the swing set me and Jessica B were having a competition of who could swing the highest. On the climbing web me and Jessica were having a competition of who could get up the top the fastest as well.
On the Lagoon walk I was tired as soon we started walking. Jessica, Bailey and I were all the way back at the end of the group. We were walking on a horse trail with lots of horse signs. We strolled past lots of horse poop but the were no horse. Not a single one in sight. We stopped somewhere around a white 2 story house but I didn’t see any people either. We had a little bit of a water break and then we turned around and wandered back to the playground. But this time I wasn’t at the back of my group I was in the middle. When we got back to the playground we got a mini afternoon tea.
At Spencer Park I had lots of fun with my friends and some things were tiring but they were really fun.
A very eventful day by the sounds of it. I liked how you saw lots of horse poop but not a single horse in sight
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